Thursday, 12 October 2017

Chapter 179 speed

Chapter 179 speed
Chapter 179 speed

Chu Yunsheng turned the cloak back and forth, trying to find a way to activate the cloak. He even tried to infuse Yuan Qi inside. However, nothing happened.

After a long sigh, he eventually gave up trying. The cloak was not something he could understand at the moment. Maybe one day he would be able to find out the mechanism behind it and use it on his armour.

The hazy shimmer once again shed its light into the crater. He had been staying in this place for three days now, and many insects were still running towards the huge pit that was left by the black sphere.

He didn't know how long it would continue, but he couldn't stay here for very long, because the insects around the golden shell had started to pile up. Soon, the swarm would notice the difference and surround him.

The golden shell was in the “sleep” mode, because it had not received any command from Chu Yunsheng for a very long time. A few insects had noticed it and tried to move the “dying” golden shell away. So Chu Yunsheng had no choice but to use type two dark energy gun to kill them.

Fortunately, in the last three days, he had also noticed the insect’s running pattern. There was roughly a ten minutes gap between each wave of insects. He could use this ten minutes gap to run away.

As he was thinking, another wave of insects was running towards the huge pit near the crater.

He had to go now. He couldn't wait until the sky went completely dark. The insects might be able to detect him in the dark. However, he would not be able to see anything. Therefore, once he ran into the swarm it would be really over.

He quickly recited the incantation to seal the golden shell again, then he slowly moved up towards the edge of the crater and began to crawl on the ground. At the same time, he was looking around trying to find anything that might give him some directional information, so he could tell where his location was right now.

After the city disappeared, there was only a gigantic pit left on the ground. However, he had already lost the sense of direction when the golden shell dug into the ground three days ago.

The only thing he could use as reference was the giant tombs at the distance. However, Jin ling city was originally surrounded by the tombs. There were tombs in all four directions!

Looking around once again, he still couldn't find any sign of the Yangtze river. It meant that he was most likely not on the west side or the north side of the huge pit.

But whether it was the east or the south, it didn't really matter at the moment. He just needed to get out of here as soon as possible.

There was Green Dragon mountain to the east of Jin Ling city. The vast mountain range was an ideal place for him to hide. There was also an abandoned small town to the south of Jin Ling city. There were many newly developed housing estates there. So it was also a good place for a short stay.

Two minutes quickly passed as he was thinking for a place to hide. But he didn't stop crawling. Because the next crater was almost 100 meters away from him. And he still needed to get there, dig a hole and cover himself with soil in 8 minutes. After 8 minutes, the next wave of insects would arrive.

He was slowly approaching the area of slimy substances. Only in that way would he be able to find more reference objects to determine where he was. 

The night was getting darker and the visibility started to reduce. It was blurry around him, so he couldn't see anything at the distance, apart from the giant tombs that were spurting out fires from time to time.

When he reached the fifth crater, it had already taken him an hour.

He still couldn't find anything that could be related to Green Dragon mountain. He was most likely in the south. He told himself.

With the fires that were spurted out by the tombs, he could vaguely see some shadows, that looked like some houses.

Time was pressing and he needed to get out of here before the night went completely dark. He needed to get to those houses and hide in there.

The reason why he needed to speed up was, that he had noticed that the insects inside the swarm started to act strangely. As if the insects in the swarm were searching for something, many insects were moving slowly towards his direction.

It was no longer safe here. He needed to run! Run as fast as he could!

He was not sure that if those shadows were really some houses or not, there was no choice for him now.

As the last bit of hazy shimmer disappeared from the sky, Chu Yunsheng jumped up and started to run.

At the same time, the insects that were searching towards him all looked up instantly. Then one by one they started to rush towards him and chase him.

Chu Yunsheng was not worried about the insects that were chasing him on the ground. He was more concerned about the green shells on the sky and the hidden monsters ahead of him.

He didn't have the fire levitation ability like what Lan Chaoyin had. He only had two legs.

He had already stored the gun and changed to the sword, since it was much easier for him to use the sword to slice open the insects that were blocking his way.

His other hand was clenching onto a Li Huo talisman. Although it was a fire elemental offensive talisman and it was not effective on attacking the red shells, he only had this type of offensive talisman now.

He didn't want to kill them, all he wanted was to make a way, so he could get into those housing estates and hid in there like what he did in the horror city.

Suddenly a lightning bolt flashed through the dark sky. It was like a whip that cracked open the dark night.

Since the dark age began, apart from snow, there weren't any rainy days, let alone thunder and lightning.

Chu Yunsheng was stunned for less than a second, then he was excited to see many buildings under the lightning flash. It was like a quiet ancient castle sitting in the darkness. It was "mysterious" and "creepy".

But in the next second, his excitement vanished. Before the lightning bolt appeared, he was running in the dark. He had only relied on his sense of directions to guide him towards the housing estate. But when the lightning bolt appeared, he noticed that he was running towards a slightly different direction, and in front of him was another crowded swarm. There were even a few golden shells in there.

The lightning bolt had only appeared for a split second, and then disappeared. But Chu Yunsheng could still hear the buzzing sound that made by the green shells when they were flying towards him.

The land was once again covered by the darkness. Apart from the insects screech sounds, Chu Yunsheng once again lost his vision.

But his body did not stop moving. He was still running! After slightly adjusting his running direction, he began to run towards the housing estate desperately.

He had to get through this. No matter what!

He covered himself with the cloaked man’s cloak, despite he did not know how to use it. Its powerful defence ability was not weaker than his armour. He could not even destroy it using this sword.

Bang…

Chu Yunsheng crashed into the swarm. With his fast speed and Yuan Qi energy shield, the first few insects were knocked away instantly. But he was still charging.

Then the sword Qi was unleashed, twelve swords Qi were formed into a spiral shape beam and drilled a way out of the swarm.

The sword Qi was like a shooting star, destroying all the insects on its way.

But the insects were not afraid of death. Many of them tried to fill the gap, and some of them were even trying to catch Chu Yunsheng from behind!

More and more insects started to push in.

When Chu Yunsheng just broke the mandibles of a golden shell which had just crawled out of the ground, his upper body was instantly pinched by a red shell.

Although he quickly broke free from the red shell’s claw, a green shell had already dived at him. He was knocked over and tumbled on the ground. Before he had a chance to get up, he was buried under many corrosive liquids…

But he did not choose to fight back. He could not kill all the insects. Only when he reached the town would he have a chance to run away.

He could not dodge the insect’s attack, because he could not see anything. He could only unleash sword Qi to make a way and use the light that was caused by the sword Qi to see the way in front of him.

He only hoped that the cloak, armour and the energy shield would be able to withstand all the attacks!

As long as he was not trapped here by the insects, he believed that he would make it.

But soon, he was buried once again. This time, he was buried by many insects. One insect suddenly jumped onto him and the other insects closely followed. Red shells, golden shells, green shells, insects after insects until it became a hill of insects. And Chu Yunsheng was buried underneath it.

Sword Qi was unleashed underneath the hill of insects, a few of the insects at the bottom were knocked away, but comparing to the hill of insects, it did not seem to have any effect at all. Chu Yunsheng roared loudly underneath the hill of insects, and his hand clenched on the Li Huo talisman tightly.

The talisman was glowing the dazzling red light and flew towards the sky…

Edited by Slayer Wolfx
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i have also updated wiki page as well.
there is now a list of character's name in there, and zerg/insects social structure in there.
please let me know which name i should put in there as well. thanks.

13 comments:

  1. 1) behind it and used it on his armour.
    should be: behind it and use it on his armour.

    2)He didn't know how long it will continue.
    should be: He didn't know for how long it will continue.

    3)was in the “sleep” mode because it has not received
    should be: was in the “sleep” mode because it had not received

    4)had no choice but using the type two dark
    should be: had no choice but to use the type two dark

    5)He had to go now. He can't wait until the sky goes completely dark. The insects might be able to detect him in the dark. But he couldn't see the directions. Once he ran into the swarm, then it is really over.

    should be: He had to go now. He can't wait until the sky goes completely dark. The insects might be able to detect him in the dark and he couldn't see the directions (so/thus/therefore) once he ran into the swarm, then it would be really over.

    or my version for this part: (so/Thus/Therefore) running at the swarm, would mean it would be really over.

    (again, I dont know the raws, so I cant be sure, actually, since I dont know would fit better, take a site with all the synonyms of therefore:
    http://www.thesaurus.com/browse/therefore)

    6)he looked around trying to find anything might give him some information.

    should be: he looked around trying to find anything that might give him some information.

    7)After the city disappeared, there is only a gigantic pit on the ground. And

    should be: After the city disappeared, there was only a gigantic pit left on the ground and

    7.5)he had already lost the direction when the golden shell dug into the ground three days ago.

    CAN BE: he had already lost his sense of direction when the golden shell dug into the ground three days ago.

    8)was surrounded by the tombs, there were tombs in all four directions.

    should be: was surrounded by the tombs, so there were tombs in all four directions.

    9)He looked around once again, couldn't find any sign of Yangtze river.

    should be: He looked around once again, (but he/but) couldn't find any sign of Yangtze river.


    10)But whether it is the east or the south, it doesn't really matter at the moment. He just needs to get out of here as soon as possible.

    should be: But whether it was the east or the south, it didn't really matter at the moment. He just needed to get out of here as soon as possible.

    [((honestly, choose, use past or present, Jeez.) I'm confused, is this how you translate it or is this how the author has written it? I'm not an expert in english, especially in past or present and stuff like that, so I cant help in this regard. whatever is closer in the translation works, I guess.)) When I'm frenzy reading, it doesnt come to notice, but now that I am slowly reading, it seems kinda weird and confusing.]

    11)The vast mountains range is an ideal place
    should be: The vast mountain range is an ideal place

    12) There was a green dragon mountain to the east of jin ling. The vast mountains range is an ideal place for him to hide. There was an abandoned small town to the south. There were many newly developed housing estate in here. So it is also a good place for a short stay.

    should be: There was a green dragon mountain to the east of jin ling. The vast (mountain) range is an ideal place for him to hide. There was (also) an abandoned small town to the south. There were many newly developed housing (estates) in here. So it is also a good place for a short stay.

    13)that those shadows are really the houses or not.
    should be: that those shadows were really the houses or not.

    14)He only has two legs.
    should be: He only had two legs.

    15)Suddenly a lightning flashed by the dark sky
    should be: Suddenly lightning flashed by the dark sky

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    1. 16)and in front of him is another crowded swarm. There are
      should be: and in front of him was another crowded swarm. There were

      17)The lightning only appeared in a split second,
      should be: The lightning only appeared for a split second,

      18)it's powerful defence ability it not weaker than his armour.

      should be: it's powerful defence ability was not weaker than his armour.

      19)But the insects are not scared of dying
      should be: But the insects were not scared of dying

      20)but the green shell has already dived at him.
      should be: but a green shell has already dived at him.

      21)only when he reached the town will he have a chance to run away.

      should be: only when he reached the town would he have a chance to run away.

      22) At the moment, he only hoped that the cloak, armour and shield will withstand all the attacks!

      should be: At the moment, he only hoped that the cloak, armour and shield wwould be able to withstand all the attacks!

      23)he believed that he will make it.
      should be: he believed that he would make it.

      24)The swords qi was unleashed underneath the hill of the insects, a few of the insects at the bottom was knocked away,

      should be: The sword qi was unleashed underneath the hill of the insects, a few of the insects at the bottom were knocked away,

      I dont think thats all, I had a hellish week and not much time to point out mistakes, you have so many mistakes lately, anyways, as english isnt my native language and I dont chinise, well, not much I can do, those should be the obvious mistakes, there are still few other mistakes with the use of present continious or past and all those), seriously, you have so many of those mistakes, that I am wondering if its the way the way the author writes or just bad translation. whole paragraphs should be rewriten, in some places if thats the case, for now, just fix those mistakes, and I reread it later, to see what I have missed. like seriously you had lots of these mistakes.

      it even gave me a warning that my message must be lower than 4.096 words to be acceptable, like, dude, I didnt even know the limit before you.

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    2. also, if its the later, and those are mistakes and not way of writting, then we are gonna have a small problem

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    3. well, I was split, to let my edit run free, or it may be just the weird way of writting the story, if only you clarify that. I think I be able to help you more

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    4. Do you have Gmail? Can I sent you the work before upload? It's the mainly bad translation.

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    5. Do you have Gmail? Can I sent you the work before upload? It's the mainly bad translation.

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    6. sure, but I'm not sure when I can reply, as I am studying for exams and have school and all, I will try my best, email is slayerwolfx2@gmail.com

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  2. thanks for the chapter. burn then all.

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  3. I can not imagine him being burried under an insect hill, the weight and pressure should be tooo high

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